中考题型书面表达

考情分析

1．命题特点

书面表达是毕节地区中考必考题型，其目的在于考查学生运用各项语法知识、正确进行书面表达的能力以及理解情景提示的内容、抓住要点和中心思想的能力。书面表达分值为30分。题型主要有话题作文、看图作文和应用作文三种，其中话题作文和应用作文所占比重较大。

2．内容特点

(1)常见的体裁有：记叙文、说明文和应用文(包括书信、日记、通知、便条、贺卡、启事、电话留言条)等。

(2)题材与生活实际紧密联系，并关注社会焦点、热点问题，体现人文关怀。

(3)注重情境设计。书面表达中所设计的情景密切联系现实生活，写作题材源于生活，使学生有话可说，有利于学生写出真情实感，也有利于学生主动性、创造性的发挥。

(4)内容要点清楚，表达形式多样，为学生提供更自由的发挥空间。

预计2018年毕节中考对书面表达的考查难度会稍有加大，文体以应用作文为主，话题作文和看图作文将有增加的趋势；内容会更加广泛，贴近社会生活。

解题方法技巧

1．写作前

①仔细审题。考生在写作之前首先要理清题目要求，根据所给提示和题目，确定要写的题材、话题、格式及行文内容等。

②准备写作。考生在写作之前先列提纲，写出文章的大致要点，并核对提示和要求，是否有遗漏或需增补的要求。

2．写作中

根据提纲要点，逐一遣词造句。

①要用最熟悉的、最有把握的词汇和基本句型；语言表达要流畅，符合英美人士的表达习惯，避免使用中式英语。

②注意英汉语法方面的差异、词的形式变化；还要注意全文在人称、时态、语态的一致性和运用是否正确。如果在写作中遇到不会的单词、词组或句子，可以找同义词或同义句来代替。

③用连词成句的方法将要点的英文词语扩展成句子，然后再用连句成文的方法来组织语言，形成短文。

④要书写工整、规范，保持卷面整洁。

3．写作后

通读全文，检查复核。在写好短文后，根据题目要求对全文进行检查和修改。要注意词数是否符合要求；体裁、格式是否正确；内容要点是否全面；语言表达上是否有错误，大到主谓一致、时态呼应、习惯用法，小至单词拼写、大小写及标点符号，都要一一检查。

(2017·毕节)

书面表达分A、B两部分，A部分10分，B部分20分。文中不能出现本人及所在学校、乡(镇)、县(区)的相关信息，凡抄袭试卷上原句不给分。

A．下面是一篇未写完的短文，请认真阅读，为短文写一个30－40词的结尾，使短文连贯完整。

One day，a boy went home happily.He sang and looked everywhere.On the way home，he had to walk past a forest.And he knew it was dangerous for him to walk past it by himself.

B．知恩，感恩是人类的美德，在我们的学习生活中，我们要感谢的人很多很多。请你以A Person I Want to Thank为题写一篇英语短文。

一、写作要点提示

1．感谢对象(父母、老师、朋友或同学等)。

2．他(她)或者他们对你的帮助。

3．如何感动你的。

4．表达感激之情。

二、写作要求

短文应紧扣要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，以使短文衔接、连贯，词数控制在80－100词。

A

【写作思路】本文要求续写故事，补全短文。首先要求认真读题，理解故事大意，然后展开合理联想，写出更多的故事情境和结尾。短文内容

要积极，充满正能量。本文提示了一个男孩独自回家时要经过一片森林，他知道这对他来说是一场危险的经历。短文应写成男孩面对困难，克服困难，顺利走出困境的勇敢精神。文章用一般过去时态，第三人称单数为主。

【经典结构】

①It's ＋adj.＋for sb.＋to do sth.

②Thinking of this，...现在分词作伴随状语

③固定搭配：take a deep breath, overcome the difficulty, as fast as one can

④大量使用形容词、副词，赋予句子生命张力及亮点。

【高分句型】

It was hard for him to start the first step into the forest alone.

He knew he had to overcome the difficulty bravely.

Thinking of this, he kept running as fast as he could till he saw his warm home ahead.

【参考范文】

One_day,_a_boy_went_home_happily._He_sang_and_looked_everywhere._On_the_way_home,_he_had_to_walk_past_a_forest._And_he_knew_it_was_dangerous_for_him_to_walk_past_it_by_himself.It was hard for him to start the first step into the forest alone. (高分句型)

After a short while, he took a deep breath and lifted his head to see the blue sky. The bright light guided him a pleasant and safe place—home.(点题，家才是最安全温暖的地方) He knew he had to overcome the difficulty bravely.(高分句型) Thinkin

g of this, he kept running as fast as he could till he saw his warm home ahead. (高分句型)

【点评】本文语言精练流畅，熟练运用了各种句型句式，如It's ＋adj.＋for sb.＋to do sth., Thinking of this，...(现在分词作伴随状语)，固定搭配如take a deep breath, overcome the difficulty, as fast as one can。本文还运用心理描写恰到好处地表达出了男孩一个人穿过森林的心路历程。

B

【写作思路】本文是一篇提纲作文。需仔细审题，理清信息，明确要点。确定感谢对象，写出其对你的帮助，并表达出你的感激之情。文章采用一般现在时态为主，可以用其他时态为辅，第一人称进行描写。可以使用恰当的情态动词来表情达意。

【经典结构】

1．状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句

2．最高级的运用

3．排比开头，谚语结尾

【高分句型】

Wherever we are today, whatever we are, we should be thankful to our parents who have given and taught us so much, so we should express our deep feelings to them，especially，to our mother.

I think my mother is one of the best mothers in the world.

She does lots of things for me, but she never wants anything in return.

Where is mother, where is the most happy place.

【参考范文】

A Person I Want to Thank

Wherever we are today, whatever we are, we should be thankful to our parents who have given and taught us so much, so we should express our deep feelings to them, especially, to our mother. (高分句型点题)I think my mother is one of the best mothers in the world. (高分句型)She is the busiest one in my family. She does chores for the family and cares about my study. She has taught me a lot. She does lots of things for me, but she never wants anything in return.(高分句型)

How will

I show my thanks to my mother? First, this year, I am going to give her a surprise birthday party and buy her a special present. Second, I'll do well in school. Third, I will help her do housework when I'm available.

As the famous saying from England goes，“Where is mother, where is the most happy place.” (高分句型)

【点评】本文运用初中英语所学句型结构，首尾呼应，前后连贯，脉络清晰，熟练运用状语从句、定语从句(Wherever we are today, whatever we are, we should be thankful to our parents who have given and taught us so much, so we should express our deep feelings to them, especially, to our mother.) 宾语从句及最高级(I think my mother is one of the best m

others in the world.)和

谚语(As the famous saying from England goes，“Where is mother, where is the most happy place.”)情真意切地表达了对母亲付出但不求回报的爱的理解和感谢，并用自己的实际行动回应母爱的感激之情。