Most important ,perhaps ,was that they had all maintained with a certain fidelity the technique and composition consistent with those of America's first popular landscape artist ,Thomas Cole ,who built a career painting the Catskill Mountain scenery bordering the Hudson River.
抓主干:
That was important
解析:most important为形容词置于句首后紧接系动词可以判定为倒装;
主干的顺序应该是:that was most important.而they had maintained with a certain fidelity the technique and composition consistent with those of America’s first popular landscape artist ,Thomas Cole ,who built a career painting the Catskill Mountain scenery bordering the Hudson River.为主语从句,在翻译的时候先翻冗长的主语从句。
析枝叶:
主语从句的主干:1.they had maintained with a certain fidelity the technique and composition(注意with a certain fidelity做状语)
2.consistent with those of America’s first popular landscape artist(做后置定语修饰technique,consistent形容词,与…相一致)
3.Thomas Cole做同位语
4.who built a career painting the Catskill Mountain scenery定语从句修饰Thomas Cole其中painting.做career的后置定语
5.bordering the Hudson River后置定语修饰scenery.
译文:他们都几乎忠诚地在坚持着和美国第一个流行景观艺术家托马斯.柯尔的技法和构图原则一致的技法和原则,这是很重要的。柯尔一直在从事着描绘哈德逊河两岸的Catskill山风景的事业。
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