高考英语中的短文改错题是大家所熟知的题型,近年来,高考英语全国卷的试卷结构和题型虽几经变革,但短文改错题始终存在。
不可否认,短文改错题具有一定的难度,大部分学生在短文改错这一块的得分率很低。鉴于此,对近十年高考全国卷的短文改错题进行了仔细的分析和研究,总结出一些对学生来说易于理解和记忆的条款,最大限度提升学生解答短文改错题的能力。
1、选材特点
短文改错题的选材多以记叙文为主,体裁和语言都贴近高中学生的实际生活。所选短文长度一般为100词左右。篇章结构的难易程度符合中学生的认知水平,无生僻的语言障碍和怪、难、偏的句子结构。
2、设错特点
通过对近十年高考短文改错题的分析和研读,发现短文改错题的考点很有规律,并且呈现极强的稳定性。
常规考点主要集中在动词、名词、形容词和副词、冠词、连词、介词、代词及各类从句的引导词等方面。
另外,短文改错的错误类型有错词、缺词和多词三种。在短文的10处错误中,三种错误类型的分配比例一般遵循8/1/1原则,即8个错词修改,1个缺词添加、1个多词删除。
其中,错词修改常涉及动词、名词、形容词和副词等方面的错误。缺词和多词则多为冠词或介词的冗余或缺失等。
3、2013--2017年高考英语全国卷短文改错考点统计表
动词 | 名词 | 形容词和副词 | 冠词 | 连词 | 介词 | 代词 | 从句引导词 | 其它 | ||
2013 | 全国Ⅰ | 2 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 0 |
全国Ⅱ | 3 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 0 | 2 | 0 | 1 | 0 | |
2014 | 全国Ⅰ | 1 | 1 | 4 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 0 | 0 |
全国Ⅱ | 3 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 0 | 2 | 1 | 0 | 0 | |
2015 | 全国Ⅰ | 3 | 1 | 2 | 1/2 | 1 | 1 | 1/0 | 0 | 0 |
全国Ⅱ | 3 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 0 | |
2016 | 全国Ⅰ | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 0 |
全国Ⅱ | 3 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 1 | |
全国Ⅲ | 2 | 1 | 3 | 1 | 0 | 1 | 2 | 0 | 0 | |
2017 | 全国Ⅰ | 2 | 1 | 2 | 0/1 | 2 | 1 | 1/0 | 0 | 1 |
全国Ⅱ | 1 | 1 | 3 | 1 | 0 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 0 | |
全国Ⅲ | 3 | 0 | 2 | 1/0 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 0 |
虽说短文改错题所设置的考点灵活多变,知识层次多,词类覆盖广。
但其实它所考查的语言知识并不复杂,只要了解命题规律和常规考点的命题要点,掌握一定的解题策略,并有针对性地加以练习和总结,也能轻松应对此题。
现结合近几年高考全国卷短文改错真题对各常规考点中出题者常设改错点的地方进行详细的分析和解读,并提出相应的解题策略。
1动词
动词是短文改错中涉及考点最多的词类,主要从以下几个方面进行考查:
(1)时态、语态的一致。如:
①I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.(2017全国卷Ⅲ)
(解析:become改为became.结合前半句中的动词entered可知,后半句的时态应和前文保持一致。)
②About one month after this photo was took,…(2017全国卷Ⅲ)
(解析:took改为taken。根据句意可知此题考查的是一般过去式被动语态。)
(2)非谓语动词、情态动词之后用动词原形、介词之后用动名词形式。如:
①We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.(2016全国卷Ⅱ)
(解析:chose改为choose.情态动词之后接动词原形;take改为taking.考查非谓语动词,and连接两个并列成分,且介词之后的动词应用动名词形式。)
②She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.(2013全国卷Ⅰ)
(解析:holding改为hold.动词不定式后接动词原形,used to do sth.过去常做某事。)
③I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.(2016全国Ⅲ卷)
(解析:wear改为wearing.介词之后的动词要用动名词形式)
解题策略:短文改错中涉及动词的修改,首先要联系上下文,看时态和语态是否一致。如果是非谓语动词,多从成分来考虑,看是否误用非谓语。另外,要注意情态动词和介词之后的动词形式。
2名词
纵观近十年高考英语全国卷短文改错题,对名词的考查主要集中在名词的数(可数与不可数),偶有考查名词所有格、行文逻辑等。如:
①…they often get some useful informations from the Internet.(2017年全国卷Ⅱ)
(解析:infrormations 改为infromation.因information是不可数名词,无复数形式。)
②The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.(2016全国卷Ⅲ)
(解析:year改为years.根据句意year要用复数形式)
③I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago.(2007全国卷)
(解析:friend改为friend’s.根据句意,一个朋友的生日应该用名词所有格friend’s表所属)
④This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.(2013全国卷Ⅱ)
(解析:grow改为growth.此处grow要作介词for的宾语,应用其名词形式growth.)
⑤My uncle says that the key to his success is honest.(2016全国卷Ⅰ)
(解析:honest改为honesty.根据语境可知,此处应用名词作表语。)
解题策略:短文改错中对于名词的考查,首先考虑是否患有数或格的错误,如无数或格的错误,就从行文逻辑来考虑。
3冠词
英语中的冠词有三个,即a,an和the.短文改错中对于冠词考查一般从以下几个方面出题:
(1) 不定冠词a和an互换。如:
…it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.(2017全国卷Ⅱ)
(解析:a改为an.考查冠词,因为hour的发音是以元音音素开头,所以其前用an.)
(2) 不定冠词a或an和the的互换。如:
…A woman saw him saying and told him to wait outside a shop.(2015全国卷Ⅱ)
(解析:a改为the.结合语境及上下文,此处应用the特指前文提到的shop.)
(3) 根据需要增删冠词。如:
①…Around me in ︿picture are the things which were very important in my life at that time.(2017全国卷Ⅲ)
(解析:picture之前加冠词the,根据句意,此处应用冠词the特指上文提到的picture.)
②In a fact, he even scared my classmates away when they came over to play or do homework with me.(2013全国卷Ⅰ)
(解析:去掉冠词a.因为in fact是固定短语,冠词a多余。)
解题策略:短文改错中对于冠词的考查,一要从a或an其后的单词发音音素来考虑,a用辅音音素开头的单词前,an用于元音音素开头的单词前。二要考虑a或an和the在泛指和特指方面是否误用,a或an表泛指,the表特指。三要注意短文中出现的短语、词组等,查是否有固定结构中冠词、介词等使用不当、多用或漏用等。
4形容词和副词
形容词和副词的考查主要涉及比较等级、修饰关系、行文逻辑的一致性。如
①I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.(2012全国新课标)
(解析:little改为less.根据语境,此处应用little的比较级less.)
②I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes ,…(2017全国卷Ⅲ)
(解析:difference改为different. 因为kinds of是名词短语,应用形容词来修饰名词 )
③…he hope that his business will grow steady.(2016全国卷Ⅰ)
(解析:steady改为steadily.因为grow为动词,修饰动词应用steady的副词形式steadily.)
④Dad and I were terrible worried.(2015全国卷Ⅱ)
(解析:terrible改为terribly.因为worried为形容词,修饰形容词应用terrible的副词形式terribly.)
⑤The teachers here are kind and helpfully.(2014全国卷Ⅱ)
(解析:helpfully改为helpful,根据语境和行文逻辑,此处应用形容词作表语。)
⑥Beside,they often get some useful information from the Internet.(2017全国卷Ⅱ)
(解析:Beside改为Besides.根据语境,此处应用副词独立成句作评述性状语。)
解题策略:短文改错中对形容词和副词的考查,首先要考虑到形容词和副词的修饰关系是否误用(形容词修饰名词或代词,副词修饰动词或形容词),然后查看形容词或副词的比较关系是否误用,如无修饰关系和比较关系的错误,那么就要根据文章的语境或逻辑来判断了。
5连词
连词主要涉及对表示并列(and)、转折(but)、选择(or)、因果(so)等关系的连词的考查。如:
①There the air is clean or the mountains are green.(2015全国卷Ⅰ)
(解析:or改为and.根据句子前后之间为并列关系可知,此处应把or改为and.)
②I have grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years.(2017全国卷Ⅲ)
(解析:and改为but.此句中not only…but also…是固定搭配。)
③ I’m going to attend my first lesson this afternoon,for I’ve got some preparation to make.(2009全国卷)
(解析:for改为so,此处句子前后之间为因果关系,所以应用因果连词so.)
解题策略:短文改错中对于连词的考查,要联系上下文,弄清句子间的逻辑关系、句子结构,再判断句子间是否需要连词、需要什么连词。
6介词
短文改错中介词主要考查惯用法,其错误的表现形式主要有三种:多词、少词和搭配错误。如:
①It was a relief and I came to a sudden stop just in the middle on the road.(2017全国卷Ⅰ)
(解析:on改为of .考查固定搭配,in the middle of“在……中间”,故on 改为of.)
②They have also bought for some gardening tools.(2017全国卷Ⅱ)
(解析:去掉介词for.因buy是及物动词,其后可直接接宾语,故介词for多余。)
③My uncle says that he never dreams︿ becoming rich in a short of time.(2016全国卷Ⅰ)
(解析:dreams的后面加介词of.考查固定用法dream of doing sth.)
解题策略:短文改错中的介词考查,要看是否有固定搭配中的介词误用、漏用或多用。及物动词之后是否多用介词,不及物动词之后是否缺少介词等。
7代词
代词主要考查代词的数、格及人称的前后一致性、指代关系的惯用法。如:
①…This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.(2017全国卷Ⅲ)
(解析:your改为my.考查人称指代一致,前文都是在讲“我”的故事,所以这里应该是“我的”高中时期的记忆。)
②Mr.and Mrs.Zhang all works in our school.(2017全国卷Ⅱ)
(解析:all改为both.考查代词,both指两者都,all表示三者以上,因主语是两个人,故用both.)
解题策略:短文改错中对代词的考查,要查人称代词的数与格(如代词的主格、宾格、所有格及反身代词等)是否误用,代词前后是否指代一致。
8从句引导词
短文改错中,从句引导词主要集中考查英语中各类从句的引导词,如定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句等。如:
①…Around me in the picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time.(2017全国卷Ⅲ)
(解析:they改为that/which.考查定语从句,先行词things是物,故用that/which)
②…he turned around and found where his parents were missing.(2015全国卷Ⅱ)
(解析:where改为that或直接去掉where.考查宾语从句,此句中that 引导的从句充当found的宾语,同时that引导宾语从句亦可省略。)
③ In fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.(2013全国卷Ⅰ)
(解析:during改为when.考查时间状语从句,during为介词,不能引导从句,故用when时间状语从句。)
解题策略:短文改错中对于各类从句引导词的考查,要根据句意和从句的类型,选用正确的引导词、判断引导词是否误加或漏用、关系代词或关系副词是否误用等。
9其它考点
纵观近十年高考英语全国卷短文改错试题,几乎全部都是围绕上述八个常规考点来设置题目的,但偶尔也会涉及八个常规考点之外知识,如2017年全国Ⅰ卷就考查了基数词改序数词的知识点,例题如下:
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday,…(2017全国卷Ⅰ)
(解析:eighteen改为eighteenth.考查序数词,18岁的生日,应该用序数词eighteenth.)
解题策略:对于短文改错中常规考点之外的其它知识的考查,要具体问题具体分析,虽然它不常出现在短文改错中,但它也并非是生、偏、难的知识,都是我们平时的学习中常接触到的知识。即使短文改错中出现一些非常规考点的知识,只要我们细心,同样可以轻松应对。
1 解题步骤
做短文改错要遵循以下几个步骤:浏览要求,心中有数;通读全文,了解大意;逐句分析,行中找错;再读短文,检查漏洞。即按照文章→句子→行→文章的顺序。
第一步:浏览要求,心中有数。我们在解答任何题目之前,一定要先弄清题目要求,不能想当然或犯经验主义错误,只有认真读了题目要求之后,才能做到心中有数,避免在解题过程中犯非知识性的低级错误。
第二步:通读全文,了解大意。短文改错是考查考生在理解的基础上对语篇整体的识错、纠错能力,必须从全篇考虑,而不能只顾一句或一行。因此,解答短文改错题要坚持从整体到局部,再从局部到整体,把握全文,用整体理解去改正词、句、篇上的错误。
第三步:逐句分析,行中找错。在把握全文的基础上,对每个句子进行认真的分析,看看单句是否有错;如果有错,有几处错误(通常情况下每句一个错误,最多不会超过两个错误),是什么错误,然后把发现的错误按题目进行改正。这样把“短文改错”转化为“单句改错”,也相应降低了题目的难度。
第四步:复读短文,检查漏洞。做完以后,再把文章阅读一遍,检查是否有遗漏情况,尤其注意上下句之间的逻辑关系。
2 注意事项
(1)要正确理解题目要求,搞清楚改什么(一般每处错误及修改仅限一个单词,绝非两个甚至更多),怎么改(增加、删除或修改);全文修改仅10处,多了(从11处起)不给分;答案一定要规范,各种修改符号不能缺少,形式和位置都要正确。
(2)短文改错中不设置拼写、标点、大小写及语序等错误,不要把注意力用在找这些方面的错误。
(3)短文改错应遵循三原则 :以保“正”改“错”为原则;以保持原意为原则;以改动最小为原则。
(4)针对短文改错中各种词类涉及的考点,有下面这么一个简单易记的口诀:
名词常考数与格 冠词常涉多与少
动词时态与语态 非谓搭配莫错了
连代形副错一样 多是故意来混淆
介词多半考搭配 多漏误用想周到
句法涉及到一致 从句常考引导词
词法句法都没错 要从逻辑去思考
(2017全国卷Ⅲ)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I look at this picture of myself,I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically,and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time, car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
参考答案:
When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in∧ picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time, car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums .This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
样题解析:
第一处:删除of. 考查介词,realize后接宾语从句,介词of多余。
第二处:had改为have. 考查动词时态,由时间状语“in the past few years”可知,此处应是现在完成时,故把had改成have.
第三处:and改为but. 考查连词,not only…but also…是固定搭配。
第四处:took改为taken.考查动词语态,photo与take为被动关系,故用被动语态,take的过去分词是taken.
第五处:become改为became.考查动词时态,结合全文和语境,谓语动词的动作发生在过去,故用become的过去式became.
第六处:picture前加冠词the或者this.考查冠词或限定词,picture作“照片”之意讲是可数名词,并且上文提到过picture,故用冠词the表特指,或用this亦可。
第七处:they改为that或which.考查定语从句引导词,先行词things是物,既可用that也用which.
第八处:difference改为different.考查形容词,kinds of是名词短语,故用形容词修饰,difference的形容词形式是different.
第九处:late改为latest.考查形近词辨析,亦是考查形容词最高级。结合语境,这里表示收集最新的专辑,故将late改为latest.
第十处:your改为my.考查人称代词指代一致。结合上下文全文,通篇都是在讲“我”的故事,故把your改为my.
1、(2017新课标I)
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.
答案:
1 eighteen-eighteenth
2 添加the/my
3 so-but/yet
4 goes-went
5 word-words
6 Turning-Turn
7 删除much
8 late-later
9 suddenly-sudden
10 on-of
2、(2017新课标II)
Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden , that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables!
答案
1 all-both或者删除
2 a-an/one
3 interesting-interested
4 that-which
5 earlier-early
6 删除for
7 Beside-Besides
8 informations-information
9 came-comes
10 添加to
3、(2017新课标III)
When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
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2 had-have
3 and-but
4 took-taken
5 become-became
6 添加this/the
7 they-that/which
8 difference-different
9 late-latest
10 your-my
4. 2016 全国I卷
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.
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5. 2016年全国II卷
The summer holiday is coming. My Classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
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6. 2016年全国III卷
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
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7. 2016年浙江卷
When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well yearslate. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we’d greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while sheprepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
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8. 2015年全国I卷
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
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9. 2015年全国II卷
One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“ How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
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10. 2015年陕西卷
My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
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11. 2015年四川卷
Hi, Janice,
It’s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We’ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
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12. 2015年浙江卷
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.
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