一是要靠词汇量,二是要有遣词造句的能力,如何让一篇文章的可读性更高,我们必须要用到恰当的转折过渡句,让文章更顺畅,逻辑更通畅;学会以下十大转折过渡句,能力提升几个档次。
1) In view of the above-mentioned negative factors/disadvantage(s)/defects in A, people's second thought is to...
鉴于上述A中的消极因素/缺点/缺陷,人们的第二想法是……
(e.g. In view of the above-mentioned negative factors in raising the output, our second thought is to improve the quality of products.)
2) To counter/offset/counteract/cancel undesirable/side/ill effects/influence/results of A, B is put forward/proposed/advanced as another better course/ solution to...
为了抵消/抵消/抵消/消除A的不良/副作用/影响/结果,B被提出/提议/提出作为另一个更好的课程/解决方案来……
(e.g. To counter the undesirable effects of rigid administration, emotional investment is advanced as another better course to success in business.)
3) In their efforts to battle against dark side/incongruous elements A h as brought along with it, however, people come up with another approach/solution /course to...namely...
然而,在努力与随之而来的黑暗面/不协调因素作斗争的过程中,人们提出了另一种方法/解决方案/途径来……
(e.g. In their efforts to battle against the dark side the examination-oriented education has brought along with it, educators come up with another approach to the problem, namely the quality-oriented education.)
4) In contrast with the drawbacks/demerits/flaws of A, B can serve as a better step/move/advance in the right direction/to ward the solution for the problem of...
与A的缺点/缺点/缺点相比,B可以作为更好的一步/朝着正确的方向/朝着解决……
(e.g. In contrast with the drawbacks caused by nuclear power, the solar power can serve as a better move toward the solution of the problem of energy crisis.)
5) So when it comes to an effective remedy for/a good counter-balance to the problems/limits/faults/weaknesses in A, people naturally think of B.
因此,当谈到a中的问题/限制/缺点/弱点的有效补救/良好的平衡时,人们自然会想到B。
(e.g. So when it comes to an effective remedy for the weaknesses in competition, people naturally think of cooperation.)
6) But it has also brought along with it the negative effect/disadvantage /weakness that...
但是它也带来了……的负面影响/缺点/缺点。
7) However, it is not without limits/problems/faults/defects, for example, ...
然而,它并非没有限制/问题/缺点/缺陷,例如……
8) Like anything else, it also has its own dark side, as evidenced in...
就像任何事物一样,它也有它自己的阴暗面,这一点在……
9) For/Despite/In spite of the advantages/benefits/positive effects A has, it has suffered from/posed some disadvantages/harm/negative effects.
尽管A有很多优点/好处/积极的影响,但是它也有一些缺点/有害/消极的影响。
10) To attain this goal, however, we still have much work to do/many obstacles to remove.
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