书信作文的“套路”
开头段:
四大内容:问候;自我介绍;写信背景;写信目的;
中间段:具体问题+具体分析;
结尾段:客套话;
书信作文的“套话”
写作练习的技巧就是学会别人的优秀表达,书信作文的一些常见思路和结构大家需要多阅读、多了解,还有在三大结构基础上的写作“套话”也需要大家及时掌握。牢记是思考和提高的基础,下面就开始拼记忆力马下来逐句背诵吧!
1开头段:灵活地去写四种内容
1、问候;
How are you doing?
How is everything going?
How is life treating you?
2、自我介绍;
I am LiHua, a 17-year-old boy currently studying in XXX middle school.
I am LiHua, who...
As the vice monitor of our class, I ...
3、写信背景(写信的缘由)
I heard that ...
My teacher told us...
I am informed that...
I learned that...我得知...
I read in your newspaper/ micro-blog /website that...
You said in your last letter that...
4、写信目的;
Now, I am writing to do sth.
Now, I am writing this letter to do sth.
Now, I am writing these few lines to do sth.
【六种最常见书信的“写信目的”部分的最佳写法】
自荐信:
Now, I am writing to apply for the job/position.
感谢信:
Now, I am writing to show/ express my heartfelt gratitude to you.
邀请信:
Now, I am writing to invite you to join the....(as our guest/ judge/ instructor).
建议信:
Now, I am writing to give you a hand.
求助信:
Now, I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/ do me a favor.
道歉信:
Now, I am writing to show/ express my heartfelt apology to you.
提分套路
2中间段:具体问题(主题句)+具体分析(拓展句)
【六种最常见书信的“中间段”最佳写法】
自荐信:写自己的优势
1
写法一
There are four main reasons why I am fit for the position/job. To begin with, ... Moreover,... What's more,... Finally,...
2
写法二
I have three main advantages. First and foremost,...Additonally,...Last but not least,...
4
写法三
I have the confidence that I can handle the job. Firstly,... Secondly,...Thirdly,...
感谢信:写对方为你所做的事
When I (看照片、看录像、看那段时间的日记、回忆那段经历), I just can't help thinking of you/ what you have done for me. It was so kind of you to (对方做的第一件事). Besides, you(对方做的第二件事), which really surprised me. Actually, I shall always remember (对方做的第三件事), considering that,(第三件事情的意义). Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and I will cherish them forever.
邀请信:描述具体的活动内容,如活动主题、意义、地点、时间、参加者和其它事项。
Here are some details for the activities. To begin with, (活动主题或活动目的,如:the theme of the contest is "human and the nature", which is undoubtedly not only entertaining but also instructive. )Moreover, (活动的地点和时间,如it will be in room 501 from 2:00 to5:00 on the afternoon of June 15th.) What's more,(活动人员,如: ten outstanding competitors will take part in the contest.)Finally, (其他信息,
如:if you need any further information, please call me at 44876655. )
建议信:写给对方的具体建议
1
写法一
There are several simple suggestions for you. To begin with, ... Moreover,... What's more,... Finally,...
2
写法二
Immediate and effective practice must be put into practice. First and foremost,...Additonally,...Last but not least,...
3
写法三
The following suggestions carried out, things would probably become much better. Firstly,... Secondly,...Thirdly,...
求助信:写具体需要帮助的事项
I wish you would be so kind as to give me some suggestions/help on the following problems. To begin with,(困难一),which has annoyed me for quite a long time. Moreover,(困难二), for personally I lack the very basic experience on this matter.Finally,...
常用句型:(做某事有困难)
1、I have trouble in doing sth.
2、I find it extremely hard for me to do sth.
3、Doing sth is another terrible headache for me.
常见困难:
1、与人相处 get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.(和我的同学/新老师/父母相处)
2、把握时间 arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things. (安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情)
3、明确目标 know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order to passionately live a purpose-driven life everyday. (知道我生命的目的和未来的目标,以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活)
生活方面
1、不懂语法
have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into use in my speaking and writing. (觉得掌握高级语法并应用于口语和写作很难。)
2、进步太慢
find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time.(典型的好孩子啊!发现自己进步没有以前快了,感到很苦恼...情商的体现!)
3、精力有限 can't be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid. (没法儿一天到晚精力充沛以便把每个瞬间都过得精彩和有意义——这句话绝对会让老师对你肃然起敬...)
学习方面
道歉信:描述不能或没能做到某事(如:赴约、还书、提供某种帮助)的原因
一般要以记叙文的形式写出以下三个内容:
1: 不能做某事的缘由;
2:对方能够谅解你的理由
3:衷心希望对方能够谅解;
【示例1】因不能按期还书而道歉——因为被我表妹强行借走了
Dear Kate,
How is everything going? I am writing to beg your pardon for my long delaying in returning to you your “Gone with the Wind” which I read through with great interest.
I had already finished reading the book and was about to return it when my cousin came to see me. Never having seen the book, She was so interested in it that I had no choice but to allow her finish the book. I hope that in view of the additional delight thus afforded by your book, you will overlook my negligence(疏忽)in not returning it sooner. (然而,看在你的那本书能够带来的双倍喜悦的面子上,希望你能够原谅我没有及早还书的错误)
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Thanking you again for the loan.
Sincerely yours,
Tom
注:除了道歉信中间段落需要写成记叙形式,其余五种书信都应该写成议论形式。不管是记叙还是议论,中间段落第一句都应该写一个概括性质的“主题句”——这是我们的原则!
3结尾段:想写好第三段,就要背过各种客套话
【六种书信“结尾段”最佳写法】
自荐信:
Hopefully the chance would be offered to me. If chosen/elected, I would dedicate all my energy and wisdom to the company/activity/club/class. Thank you for reading my letter/ listening to my speech in such a hot summer. Looking forward do your reply at your earliest convenience./ I won't let you down.(我不会让你们失望)
注:在这个段落模板中,我们融合了自荐信结尾段和竞选演讲结尾段两个段落,两种结尾段都需要四个句子。
感谢信:
I, on behalf of my whole family/class/school, would like to thank you again for what you have done for me/us. May you be blessed in everything you do.
我代表我的全家再次向你所做的一切向你表达感谢。祝你万事如意!
邀请信:
We are sincerely looking forward to your coming. My schoolmates/family and I would feel much honored if you could make it. I would like to meet you at the school gate and please drop me a line or give me a call to let me know your decision soon.Thank you.
我们衷心期望您能大驾光临。如果您能来,同学们和我将非常的荣幸。我会在校门口迎接您,请回信或打电话告诉我您的决定。谢谢。
建议信:
Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you. If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know as soon as possible. I'm sure you can solve your problembefore long.
求助信:
Hopefully your kind and timely help would be offered to me.Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
道歉信:
Hopefully you would accept my sincere apologize.
注:六种书信最后的结尾都是:Best wishes, / Yours truely, /XXX
核心词汇积累:
website [ˈwebsaɪt] n.网站 复数: websites
I found this information on their website .
我在他们的网站上发现了这一信息。
For current prices please visit our website .
有关目前的价格,请访问我们的网站。
Go to the website today and you can unsubscribe online.
今天上网就可以退订。
For details visit our website at www.cobuild.collins.co.uk.
欲知详情,请访问我们的网站www.cobuild.collins.co.uk。
《柯林斯高阶英汉双解学习词典》
Check out our website at www.cobuild.collins.co.uk.
请登录我们的网站www.cobuild.collins.co.uk查看。
A website need not cannibalise existing sales.
网站并不妨碍目前的销售。
gratitude [ˈɡrætɪtuːd] n.感激之情;感谢
He smiled at them with gratitude .
他向他们笑了笑表示谢意。
I would like to express my gratitude to everyone for their hard work.
我要对所有辛勤劳动的人表示感谢。
She was presented with the gift in gratitude for her long service.
这礼物赠送给她以表达对她长期服务的感激之情。
a deep sense of gratitude
深深的谢意
I owe you a great debt of gratitude (= feel extremely grateful) .
我对你感激不尽。
I wish to express my gratitude to Kathy Davis for her immense practical help.
凯茜·戴维斯实实在在地帮了大忙,我想对她表示感谢。
I cherish for you the liveliest feeling of affection and gratitude.
我对你怀有最强烈的爱和感激之情。
《汉英大词典》
To my father I dedicate this volume in token of affection and gratitude.
我谨以此书献给我的父亲,以表示对他的爱戴和感激之情。
Words can hardly express our gratitude to you.
我们对你的感激难以用语言表达。
I can hardly express my gratitude to you for your help.
对于你的帮助,我几乎难以表达我的谢意。
Please convey my gratitude to her.
请向她转达我的谢意。
No words can fully express my gratitude.
千言万语也表达不尽我的感激心情。
I owe a big debt of gratitude to her.
我对她万分感激。
Her arms tightened about his neck in gratitude
她充满感激,把他的脖子搂得更紧了。
I owe you a debt of gratitude which I shall never be able to repay.
我永远报答不尽你的恩情。
She showed me her gratitude by inviting me to dinner.
她请我吃饭以表谢意。
《汉英大词典》
The Professor lavished his learning on the young visitor but gained little gratitudefor his pains.
教授将自己的学识倾囊传授给那位年轻访客,到头来却没有获得一点感激。
Relief and gratitude were written all over his face
他一脸释然与感激。
Elsie has had enough time to show her gratitude
埃尔茜有足够的时间来表达她的感激之情。
A light of gratitude came into her eyes.
从她的眼神可以看出她很感激。
Her tears of gratitude rolled down her face.
感激的泪珠沿着她的面颊滚下来。
He had won her undying gratitude
他让她感念一生。
《柯林斯高阶英汉双解学习词典》
这句表达鲜活到让我欢呼雀跃,太棒啦!
advantage [ədˈvæntɪdʒ] n.有利条件;有利因素;优势;优点;(局末平分后)占先;优势分
v.使处于有利地位;有利于;有助于
a big/great/definite advantage
大的 / 很大的 / 确定的优势
Being tall gave him an advantage over the other players.
他个子高,比其他运动员有利。
an unfair advantage (= sth that benefits you, but not your opponents)
不公平的有利因素(指有利于自己、但并不有利于对手)
She had the advantage of a good education.
她具有受过良好教育的有利条件。
A small car has the added advantage of being cheaper to run.
小型轿车还有一个优点是养护成本比较便宜。
the advantages of living in a small town
在小城镇居住的好处
Men have created a social and economic position of advantage for themselves over women.
男性已经为自己创造了优于女性的社会和经济上的有利地位。
The great advantage of home-grown oranges is their magnificent flavour
家产柑橘的一大好处是口感极佳。
I intend to take full advantage of this trip to buy the things we need.
我打算充分利用这次旅行来购买我们所需的物品。
She took advantage of him even after they were divorced.
甚至在他们离婚后,她还在占他的便宜。
This custom-built kitchen has many advantages over a standard one.
这间定制的厨房与标准厨房相比存在诸多优点。
This gives the professional an inestimable advantage.
这给了专业人士一个无法估量的优势。
convenience [kənˈviːniəns] n.方便;适宜;便利;便利的事物(或设施);方便的用具
Can you telephone me at your convenience to arrange a meeting?
你能不能在你方便时给我来个电话,安排见一次面?
Please telephone at your earliest convenience.
请尽早打电话。
It was a great convenience to have the school so near.
学校这么近真是太方便了。
The house had all the modern conveniences (= central heating, etc.) that were unusual at that time.
这座房子拥有在当时并不常见的所有现代化便利设施。
He was happy to make a detour for her convenience.
为了她方便,他很乐意绕道。
Mail order is a convenience for buyers who are too busy to shop.
邮购对于那些没有时间逛商店的购物者来说是一项非常方便的服务。
In this resort you can enjoy all the comfort and convenience of modern tourism.
在这个度假胜地你可享受所有现代旅游的舒适与便利。
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