满分作文实例欣赏：一封求助信

求助信

假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛 (speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。

请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：

1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况；

2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；

3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。

注意:

1.词数:120—150；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom，

How is it going these days? I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing. Have you got used to the life in China? Are you enjoying your life? I hope you are.

Let me tell you a piece of good news: I’m going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation. So I’m busy preparing for it. But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper English words to express my thoughts. Besides, I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation（语调）. Of course, as a native English speaker, you can give me some suggestions. In addition, I’m going to visit you after the contest.

I’m sure we will have a wonderful time together in Beijing! I can hardly wait to see you! I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua