环境是当今社会的一个核心话题,保护校园环境是每一位师生共同的责任和义务。然而,现在的校园中随意涂写(to scribble)和乱扔垃圾(to litter)的现象却屡见不鲜。因此,关于校园环境保护的话题应该引起高度的重视,本文将给出一篇关于校园环境的英语范文,并附有相应的翻译的评析,供学习者学习、积累。

【校园环境范文欣赏】

School is our second home, where we spend the majority of time living and learning. Therefore, a good school environment is the precondition for our health and growth.

However, I am sorry to have witnessed some improper behaviour among us students: scribbling and littering everywhere. Not only does it destroy our school environment, it is also a spoiler of the image of our school.

This issue is now crying out to be solved and it should be a common concern for the school administration, staff, and all the students. In my humble view, the school should place more dustbins around the set up specific rules against those rude practices. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and enough awareness of environment protection.

I hold a firm belief, with the joint effort of all people concerned, that our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. I am looking forward to a more tidy school, and a more beautiful world.

【翻译】

学校是我们的第二家园,我们大部分时间都在学校里生活和学习。因此,一个良好的校园环境是保证我们健康和成长的前提条件。

然而,我很难过地看到我们学生中有很多诸如乱涂乱画和随处乱扔垃圾的不妥现象。这不仅毁坏了我们的校园环境,也破坏了我们的学校形象。

这个问题迫切需要解决,而且应该靠我们学校的管理层和全体师生来共同解决。以我拙见,学校应该安置更多的垃圾桶,而且还要为这些不文明行为制定出具体的规章制度。同时,应该鼓励同学们培养良好的习惯,培养足够的环保意识。

我坚信,在所有相关人员的共同努力下,我们的校园会在不久的将来变得更加美好。我期待一个更加整洁的校园,一个更加美好的世界。

【评析】

这是一篇关于校园环境保护的结构清晰、语言流畅的精品范文。文中用到了很多高级的词汇,例如,majority(大部分),precondition(先决条件),witness(目睹),joint effort(共同努力)等等。句式使用上也非常灵活优美,not only...but also的使用 (Not only does it destroy our school environment, it is also a spoiler of the image of our school.)高效地表达出了一个递进关系;非谓语动词的完成体作原因状语( I am sorry to have witnessed some improper behaviour among us students: scribbling and littering everywhere. )使用的非常地道。同时,文章从思想层面也体现出了一定的深度,从校园到世界( I am looking forward to a more tidy school, and a more beautiful world. )看到了小作者高度的世界责任感。

满分作文背诵:校园环境